Elevator Pitch No. 3
For the most part, I have only been making minor changes to the content of my pitch as it seems to have had good reception. However, I am still working on actually having it memorized. Something I realized this time around was that it takes me less time to get through the pitch, which is probably telling that I am getting more accustomed to talking about my proposal.
Hey Archie,
ReplyDeleteI agree that your content is good and your memorization is getting better. In a real elevator pitch it might be better to use hand gestures or walk and have a good stance to capture the room and the audience. I learned that in public speaking. But other than that good improvement from your last two!
Hi Archie,
ReplyDeleteI agree with Victoria, its great that you memorized it because the flow it a lot better but it would've been perfect if you had some hand movements or a better stance. Other that that your pitch was very informational!
You are doing so well! I really enjoyed watching your pitch. You are so confident in your words and delivery. I really stand behind your business idea and I hope that it can actually happen. Hand motions may add to your pitch, but I understand that might be hard when you do not have a power point or something like that in front of you.
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