Elevator Pitch 2
Reflection:
I got lost in the weeds a bit in my first pitch
and needed to get my point across quicker. For this second pitch, I made sure
to reiterate the topic and ensure that the entire pitch revolved around my
product and the problems it would solve.
Hey Archie,
ReplyDeleteGreat work on your pitch. I think you did a good job of identifying where you could improve and doing what was necessary to modify your pitch. You were able to convey your idea quicker this go round and incorporate the topic throughout the pitch. Great work!!
Hey Archie,
ReplyDeleteI think there is a huge difference between your first elevator pitch and your second one. You got all your information across and you spoke loud. Although maybe one thing when you are doing an elevator pitch is that you probably shouldn't have notes out like that the whole time? Good job though.
Your pitch was definitely a lot stronger this time around. You sounded more confident and you were a lot more coherent in the idea you wanted to speak towards. You were giving a lot of your attention to the notes though, it made it feel less directed at the viewer and more just read aloud.
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